"I’m not even going to try to rate this thing. It’s not really a story, from the parts I’ve seen—more a long, (seemingly intentionally) confused, rambling monologue, full of existential angst. If you like that kind of thing, give it a go." - Chris Poirier @ Web Fiction Guide
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Jimney // 20090703 at 2043 |
Dying?? I go away for a week or two, and come back to find you dying??
Why are you dying? And she is dead too? Whyyy??
5ws1h // 20090706 at 1458 |
The trains collided.
I had her then I lost her.
I wouldn’t let go.
Now she’s gone and my arm with her.